Six Sentence Sunday - A Knight in Cowboy Boots #9 & a Giveaway

This week, in addition to sharing a six sentence snippet, I'm going to give away a copy of my ebook A Knight in Cowboy Boots to one lucky commenter, so be sure I have a way to contact you if you win.

This scene is between our hero and his sister. Rachel is the concierge at the hotel where Zach's lady love works. She's also the oldest girl of a very large family, so she can be a little on the bossy side.

Rachel spun toward him, dropping his arm to point a threatening finger at him. “No!”

Zach set his jaw. “I’m getting a little tired of being told ‘no’ by the women around here like I’m a puppy who’s just piddled on the carpet. I got no interest in working my way through your staff, but if I did, you couldn’t stop me.”

“Really?” She said, her voice dripping wicked speculation.
     Zach’s body instinctively tried to suck his balls inside.  

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  1. I just spit out my drink. Well done.

  2. Lol! Love it - the interaction is spot on. :)

  3. Way to stand up for yourself, Zach! Nice job on your six Suzie!

  4. I love the characters. I want to get to know Zach a lot more.
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  5. Awesome! I think he better watch out for his sister! She sounds like a feisty one!!

  6. Okay, this one made me laugh out loud, but I refuse to type LOL.

    Good job!

  7. Put in his place by his sister! Awesome!

  8. Oh, I'm falling about laughing. Good one!

  9. Exactly the way a sister sets her brother straight. Love it!

  10. Once I got the syntax right, Excel randomly generated #9. That's you, Siobhan. I'll be in touch.