This scene is between our hero and his sister. Rachel is the concierge at the hotel where Zach's lady love works. She's also the oldest girl of a very large family, so she can be a little on the bossy side.
Rachel spun toward him, dropping his arm to point a threatening finger at him. “No!”
Zach set his jaw. “I’m getting a little tired of being told ‘no’ by the women around here like I’m a puppy who’s just piddled on the carpet. I got no interest in working my way through your staff, but if I did, you couldn’t stop me.”
“Really?” She said, her voice dripping wicked speculation.
Zach’s body instinctively tried to suck his balls inside.
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