A tiny bit of background and setting... Cleo and Alec are fixing themselves grilled cheese and tomato soup. Earlier Alec stated that perfect crimes were a rare occurrence.
“If you wanted to murder someone, how would you do it?” Cleo asked.
Alec smiled. Good. Her mind was working again. He topped half the bread slices with cheese. “I’d take them hunting.”
She twisted to look at him. “Do you hunt?”
He set the microwave for ten seconds to soften up the butter then plugged in the grill, so it would preheat. “Not since I was a kid, but I’d take it up again.”
“So you’d take them hunting and then what? Just shoot them?”
“Sure. Hunters shoot each other all the time.”
“Not that often.”
“Often enough.”
She turned back to the stove but not before he caught the beginning of a smile. “Yes, your honor. I shot him. But it was an accident. All eight times.”
Alec laughed. “Yeah, you gotta make sure the first one is fatal, or it kinda falls apart.” The microwave dinged. He got out the butter and went to work spreading it evenly on the bread.
She shook her head. “It wouldn’t work. If you hated someone bad enough to want them dead, they’d never agree to go hunting with you.”
“I didn’t say there weren’t logistical problems to work out."
Hope you enjoyed it, and there's still time to get Liar, Liar, Heart's Desire
If you're interested, here's the blurb:
Cleo Morgan is a liar.
And they’re not little, white liars but big, black whoppers. She’s lying to everyone in her hometown, letting them believe she still works for a reputable paper when, in reality, she’s sold her soul to The Inside Word, a tell-all supermarket tabloid no one wants to admit they read.
She’s lying to Alec Ramirez, the tabloid’s star reporter, who is training her to write their kind of story their way. He doesn’t know the woman who’s been arrested for murder in the story they’re covering is her mother. Or that Cleo is conspiring with her old boyfriend to steal that story out from under him and using it to buy her way back into her old life.
And she may be lying to herself that leaving Alec behind when she goes will be easy. Because she absolutely, unequivocally, beyond the shadow of any doubt does not want him in her life on a permanent basis.
Love that last line! LOL (It sounds like something I'd say.)
ReplyDeleteYes, the last line is the kicker.
DeleteCongratulations, Suzie!
ReplyDeleteQuite the conversation! Nice juxtaposition with the everyday activity of making a snack.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue, smart and snappy. For some reason, I was reminded of a certain US Supreme Court judge...
ReplyDeleteThat wouldn't be Scalia, would it? I love reading his opinions. He always cuts to the bone.
DeleteThat was an interesting snippet. I'd never want to go hunting with these two.
ReplyDeleteOh I love this conversation, it's just so relaxed and truthful, and the bit of humor you tacked on was terrific.
ReplyDeleteHappy release day!
Thanks. I love throwing in little humorous lines. It's what makes writing fun.
DeleteAll eight times... giggle. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSuch a relief when people laugh in the right places.
Delete“I didn’t say there weren’t logistical problems to work out." LOL! That or the "all eight times" would be so a response I would say, or one my characters. Love the sass.
ReplyDeleteSass is what these two do. That's why the sparks fly so often between them.
DeleteTaken hunting against his will? Nice. :-)
ReplyDeleteGood, crisp dialogue. :-)
Great opening paragraph. I like the sound of this one. I'm off to get a copy. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI love the dialogue between these two :)
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a really easy solution. You won't even need to take care of the body. I guess she'll never go hunting with Alec now, even if he asks nicely. Well, especially not if he asks nicely.
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