Another Six Sentence Sunday. This is from A Knight in Cowboy Boots which, to my delight, is now available on Amazon. You can read an excerpt here or download the opening at Amazon.
This is the moment after their first time together. Maddie has just made a comment about Zach's "equipment."
“Assault weapon?” Zach repeated. “That there’s standard equipment, darlin’.”
“There’s nothing standard about that,” Maddie said.
“I didn’t hear you complaining.”
“Of course not. You sprang it on me when I was mentally incompetent.”
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Love the snappy dialogue! Must put your book on my tbr list - looks wonderful!
ReplyDeleteTerrific dialogue. Funny too!
ReplyDeleteLOL! That's hysterical!
ReplyDeleteoh man, that is funny--super dialog..leaves me wanting to download...
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Liz
Love it when the bantering and innuendo is done so well. It makes it fun to read.
ReplyDeleteFun euphemisms! Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery funny dialogue!
ReplyDeleteHaha. Was she mentally incompetent because of his 'equipment' or because of something else? Makes me want to read more. . .great job with your six!
ReplyDeleteSo he makes a girl's mind go fuzzy, huh? I gotta meet this man. Great six!
ReplyDeleteGreat 6! I seriously giggled at the "standard equipment" line! He sounds like a VERY likable hero!
ReplyDeleteAmy Durham
Great dialogue. Fantastic six.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue!! very snappy! love it! *G*!
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A.
hahaha!! Clever and fun!!
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